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Story Or Series Title: My Curiosity
CulpritAuthor's Name: Dorysblue

Full Name (plus titles if any):Sarah Carter, AKA Kat. These names are used interchangeably throughout the fic (I think the author may have been high when writing this, therefore the characteristic short term memory loss is to be expected)
Full Species(es): Poddie. But she lives in Zion and was adopted. Because its very characteristic of the Zion fleet to unplug people who cant care for themselves.
Appearance: "She had crystal blue eyes that rarely showed any hatred at all. She had a nice natural tan, and she liked to crack her toes." Well then! Thank you for telling us about your absurd habits. What is this, the personal ads for Mary Sues?

Annoying Origin:She was unplugged, and taken under the wing of Commander Carter, who took over for when Morpheus quit and married Niobe and had 2.3 children
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Smith has an extra speshul interest in her. He kidnaps her, and takes her to his little nest of lurrrrve.
Annoying Special Abilities: She attracts a pedophilic Smith.
Other Annoying Traits:Her eyes can emanate hatred Only sometimes, she's usually a docile Sue She also uses her name interchangeably with her hacker handle, which is not so much a trait as just annoying. She also has an ex with named Doomsdaddy. No wonder they broke up! It was written in his name! Foreshadowing, people!11!1

The "Plot":Kat is a poddie that is living in Zion. She wakes up one day from a horrible dream, a la Neo, and remembers its her first day as an Operator! YAYZ!11oneone!!11. She then gets kidnapped by Smith and taken to his apartment, which is seedy and ratty looking, everything that movieSmith would avoid.
Best Line:"Kat was running in a street.As you can obviously see, she's running through it with her speshul concrete cutting gloves It was cold, dark, and wet. There were only a few streetlights on and nobody else on the streets. It was just her and no one else.Would it be implied that there was no one on the street if she just said there was only her there? Oh nevermind, Sue logic But, she was running from something.or someone. She ran into a dead endWHAM! with a brown door. It was locked. Suddenly, she felt something colder than ice behind herColder than ice, colder than snow... who could it be?!. She spun around and saw nothing, but the reflection of the light around the corner. But, soon, there was a menacing shadow."dun dun DUNNNNNNNH

Sarah Carter woke up screaming and in a cold sweat. That dream scared everything she knew she had in her out of her and back again!Agh! There go my intestines! And my pancreas! Oh, wait, they're back. And, the most ridiculous thing about it was she couldn't remember a single thing about it.Dayum, that esctasy worked well She heard her alarm clock go off, and she cursed and rushed late into her duty of an operator for the ship the Sacrifice.And its sister ship, the Cure. Also in the same fleet, the Goth, the Crackwhore and the Angst She had long silky black hair, all the way down her back.Yeah, cause you find that a lot on new poddies She had crystal blue eyes that rarely showed any hatred at all. She had a nice natural tanFrom all the sun in Zion, and she liked to crack her toesFabulous. Thanks for the info. She ran onto her ship running into her father (well, her adopted father), the 2nd head commander of control, Commander Carter *catchy no? *.Actually, no, not really "Sarah, your late again?" Her foster father asked with a disappointed look. "I had thought you would have become more responsible, especially on your first day as a recruit." "Hey daddy!11!11one!1 I'm sorry I'm late again, but I just had this freaky dream.. oh never mind it was probably nothing, but yes I know today is the first day off operator.. officially!" Commander Carter smiled at his foster daughter and embraced her shortly before saying. "Well, off you go before they decide to leave without you!" She laughed, and ran faster than she ever did. Curiosity Sarah CarterIn fact, Sarah was her middle name, her first being Curiosity looked toward the screen of the matrix. The code was all green and black.Really? I was expecting pink and orange She saw Neo's code. He was probably looking for Smith. She had heard of the infamous and ruthless Agent Smith, but, she had only been inside the matrix twice and she had never even seen Smith. Sarah's alias, was Kat.
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<b>Story Or Series Title:</b> My Curiosity
<strike>Culprit</strike><b>Author's Name:</b> Dorysblue

<b>Full Name (plus titles if any):</b>Sarah Carter, AKA Kat. These names are used interchangeably throughout the fic (I think the author may have been high when writing this, therefore the characteristic short term memory loss is to be expected)
<b>Full Species(es):</b> Poddie. But she lives in Zion and was adopted. Because its very characteristic of the Zion fleet to unplug people who cant care for themselves.
<b>Appearance</b>: "She had crystal blue eyes that rarely showed any hatred at all. She had a nice natural tan, and she liked to crack her toes." <i>Well then! Thank you for telling us about your absurd habits. What is this, the personal ads for Mary Sues?</i>

<b>Annoying Origin:</b>She was unplugged, and taken under the wing of Commander Carter, <i>who took over for when Morpheus quit and married Niobe and had 2.3 children</i>
<b>Annoying Connections To Canon Characters:</b> Smith has an extra speshul interest in her. He kidnaps her, and takes her to his little nest of lurrrrve.
<b>Annoying Special Abilities:</b> She attracts a pedophilic Smith.
<b>Other Annoying Traits:</b>Her eyes can emanate hatred <i>Only sometimes, she's usually a docile Sue</i> She also uses her name interchangeably with her hacker handle, which is not so much a trait as just annoying. She also has an ex with named Doomsdaddy. <i>No wonder they broke up! It was written in his name! Foreshadowing, people!11!1</i>

<b>The "Plot":</b>Kat is a poddie that is living in Zion. She wakes up one day from a horrible dream, a la Neo, and remembers its her first day as an Operator! YAYZ!11oneone!!11. She then gets kidnapped by Smith and taken to his apartment, which is seedy and ratty looking, everything that movieSmith would avoid.
<b>Best Line:</b>"Kat was running in a street.<i>As you can obviously see, she's running through it with her speshul concrete cutting gloves</i> It was cold, dark, and wet. There were only a few streetlights on and nobody else on the streets. It was just her and no one else.<i>Would it be implied that there was no one on the street if she just said there was only her there? Oh nevermind, Sue logic</i> But, she was running from something.or someone. She ran into a dead end<i>WHAM!</i> with a brown door. It was locked. Suddenly, she felt something colder than ice behind her<i>Colder than ice, colder than snow... who could it be?!</i>. She spun around and saw nothing, but the reflection of the light around the corner. But, soon, there was a menacing shadow."<i>dun dun DUNNNNNNNH</i>

<lj-cut text="The Best of this Sue-ish saga of wangst and bad eggs">Sarah Carter woke up screaming and in a cold sweat. That dream scared everything she knew she had in her out of her and back again!<i>Agh! There go my intestines! And my pancreas! Oh, wait, they're back.</i> And, the most ridiculous thing about it was she couldn't remember a single thing about it.<i>Dayum, that esctasy worked well</i> She heard her alarm clock go off, and she cursed and rushed late into her duty of an operator for the ship the Sacrifice.<i>And its sister ship, the Cure. Also in the same fleet, the Goth, the Crackwhore and the Angst</i> She had long silky black hair, all the way down her back.<i>Yeah, cause you find that a lot on new poddies</i> She had crystal blue eyes that rarely showed any hatred at all. She had a nice natural tan<i>From all the sun in Zion</i>, and she liked to crack her toes<i>Fabulous. Thanks for the info</i>. She ran onto her ship running into her father (well, her adopted father), the 2nd head commander of control, Commander Carter *catchy no? *.<i>Actually, no, not really</i> "Sarah, your late again?" Her foster father asked with a disappointed look. "I had thought you would have become more responsible, especially on your first day as a recruit." "Hey daddy!<i>11!11one!1</i> I'm sorry I'm late again, but I just had this freaky dream.. oh never mind it was probably nothing, but yes I know today is the first day off operator.. officially!" Commander Carter smiled at his foster daughter and embraced her shortly before saying. "Well, off you go before they decide to leave without you!" She laughed, and ran faster than she ever did. Curiosity Sarah Carter<i>In fact, Sarah was her middle name, her first being Curiosity</i> looked toward the screen of the matrix. The code was all green and black.<i>Really? I was expecting pink and orange</i> She saw Neo's code. He was probably looking for Smith. She had heard of the infamous and ruthless Agent Smith, but, she had only been inside the matrix twice and she had never even seen Smith. Sarah's alias, was Kat.<I am loving, this lovely, punctuation</i> She had desperately wanted to see this machine whom some said was worse than the devil.<i>Same as I really want to get to know Bush</i> Kat was not like any resistant, she looked for trouble and tried to see what ways she could get out of it.<i>So, she's an annoying little brat?</i> Besides, Smith was an exile, an outcast, like her. From even when she was a newborn, Sarah never knew her real parents, she always had been an orphan, and never was truly accepted into society.<i>Oh the ANGST!</i> When she was released from the matrix, the Commander took her under his wing.<i>He has a penchant for whiny angstful teens</i> But, she still desperately searched for someone like her, and this Smith guy/machine, fascinated her.<i>Same way morons facinate me</i> That dream that she had, never had come to her before until today.She wasn't sure why she had that dream, but she tried to forget about him and that dream for today. For today, was the day she was going into the matrix for another time!<i>Whoa, its lyk my 1002393 time!11!one!</i> She was so excited; they were going to teach her new things about the matrix and agents.

God that was horrible. If anyone wants to further explore/rot their brain, this is available on ff.net (where else?!)

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