Something I've noticed: Mary Sue lovers stay in one clique, while the stupid ones stay in another, and the good fanfiction authors stay at the Construct. =D
Kit19, Shivonne, and Megami no Inazumi, [the author of this little gem here that was reported at </a></b></a>marysues], are all Sue authors. Look! They all review each other!
Kit19's Immortality fic has been removed by ff.net, so I'll post another one of her fics up.
Story Or Series Title: Hello again Boys
Culprit Author's Name: Kit19, co-written with Shivonne.
Full Name (plus titles if any): Shi
Full Species(es): A rogue assassin program.
Distinguishing Features: I think she can switch forms at will. With Kit, she looks like a normal human, but she can turn into " a tall woman with shoulder length choppy black hair and green eyes, wearing a black halterneck top, red flares and black boots, along with a long black coat trimmed with fake silver fur around the end of the sleeves and the hood..."
Special Possessions (if any): A pair of sais. Copying Daredevil, are we now?
Annoying Origin: The Source
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: She's the Twins' 'little sister', which later morphs into the 'twin sister' of the Twins. I have no idea how this came about, because if there were triplets, the Twins and Shi would be named Triplet #1, #2 and #3, correct?
Annoying Special Abilities: Her ability matches that of the Two, Kit.
Other Annoying Traits: I think she can control the Agents too, even though she's a rogue program.
The "Plot": Shi wants to kill the Two. For what reason, I don't know.
Best Line(s): Her notes.
"Written by Shi, we came up with the fight scene together in a chat, as you probably will already know. The reason I'm posting it is because Shi didn't get any reviews when she posted it on her account and took it down so I talked to her and we decided that I could post it on my account in hopes of more replies. So, if you do choose to review, direct it to Shi please."
"Author's note: this fic is literally a typed up version of a random AIM chat between myself and Kit, which is still going on.so there'll probably be more yet! But we both seem to have saved the chat (which is literally just the fight from when they reach the Merovingian's hallway, and both gone away and separately based fics on it.so it'll be interesting to see exactly how they work out!! Can't wait to read yours Kit!!!"
Now run away.
Notes: OOC Twins [as always]. I think Shi betrayed them or something and changed her program [without going to the Mero, to boot]. The Twins thus try to help Kit when she's confronted by her, but they're attacked by Agents and can't help her. We are dosed with a full chapter of decently written action sequences between Kit and Shi. Then it gets boring after a while, because I don't know why Shi wants to kill the Two, and the fact this story has nothing to do with canon or the Matrix, save for a few c00l speshul effects only the Matrix can provide.
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
( When people can't press the Enter key while typing out dialogueCollapse )